Nice
This ain't hardcore, but it is heavy!
Reminds me of the stuff I used to listen to years back... Original Ill Nino, Staind, Godsmack, Nonpoint, etc.
Problem being that it does become somewhat repetitive. I mean, I've hit the song more or less halfway through and it's changed. So you know... not very commercialised, as it would be. Only really due to the time it took to change chord progression.
Asides from, all in all, worth the manuscript it was sculptured on. I'd love to hear this as a finished piece, and your compositions in general. Takes me back, this does!